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PyroSonicX
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Temple of the Dark Sorcerer
« on: 02/27/03 at 17:30:21 » |
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Temple of the Dark Sorcerer
A heavily guarded Sorcerer (name yet to come) holds a special enchanted ring that is rumored to be able to changes one’s destiny (ring of destiny-may be subject to alterations). Many Elite Warriors have tried to obtain this precious stone; unfortunately very few have even managed to make it to the Dark Sorcerer, yet be able to defeat him.
Dark Sorcerer
Korsan GateKeeper
Shade Demon
And of mix of all current creatures available
You have entered the Temple of the Dark Sorcerer
The Temple of the Dark Sorcerer exits to the South
The Temple has a dim glow from the torches hanging on the walls, rats scatter around on the floor upon noticing an unwanted visitor, one path leads to the West, and the other goes to the East.
I have a map done up on the ASCII mapmaker program, if anyone decides that they like this idea, I can send it.
Thank You,
Shawn
P.S. This is a basic outline, more can and will be added if needed, upon approval of the idea.
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Re: Temple of the Dark Sorcerer
« Reply #1 on: 02/27/03 at 19:34:16 » |
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It lacks a storyline currently, I wouldn't mind seeing one.
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Re: Temple of the Dark Sorcerer
« Reply #2 on: 02/27/03 at 19:42:53 » |
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Too many comma's in your description. Use periods!
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Re: Temple of the Dark Sorcerer
« Reply #3 on: 02/27/03 at 22:17:55 » |
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Try to elaborate on the enter descriptions, too. "You have entered the Temple of (Insert Evil Name Here)" basically applies to any sort of temple, so what makes this one special? You can give an overview of the square in the enter description, then go into full detail with the look descriptions.
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