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Thenobleone
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The Demonic Fortress
« on: 02/14/03 at 21:23:52 » |
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The Demonic Fortress.
This area I would think can be put on the plain path and you go down to enter.
The Square where you go down (Entrance): Plain Path you notice a distinct fissure on the vary path you stand. You realize that there are scattered limbs and bones.
Also, you notice that there are many broken swords, axes, even armor scattered all over the terain. What you naotice immediatly amongst the carnage is a head of what
apears to be a demon from the under world.
The Path of Carnage (Level 1 of Demonic Fortress): You stand on a path cunstructed of stone. The only thing is you don't see the stone all you see is the bodies of this paths victims and their tattered armor.
The Path of Death (Level 2 of Demonic Fortress): You stand on a path constructed of its victims. You notice fresh bood boiling on your boots from the very humid air. You can taste death on the tip of you toungue, you just hope it is not yours.
The Path of Destruction (Level 3 of Demonic Fortress): You stand on a path made of the rubble of many ancient civilizations. The air is foul here because of the intence heat, and the decomposing bodies. You realize that you must be close to hell itself.
Note: The Bosses chamber is on lvl 3.
The Chamber of the Devil's Advocate: You see the intence fires of the underworld, and in the shadows you see a tall red eyed demon only worthy of this place.
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When you kill the Devil's Advocate you get The Sword of Souls.
The Sword of Souls: Is crafted from the bones of the victims of the Advocate. This sword is enchanted with the souls of the advocates victims which give it great power and a edge that never dulls.
a base damage of possibly 30 and is magical and vampyric and has some sort of poison damage. <---- this can be changed if it is too strong.
Monsters:
LvL 1:
Demon Wisp: Is very etherial and weighs almost nothing but deals incredible damage to its foes.
Demon Ninja Monkey: Stands at about 3' and uses sharpend bones as its wepon. It is exremely agile and should be aproached with caution.
LvL 2:
demonic Moss: This moss is engulfed with demonic aura from the underworld itself. It aura brings it to life and shoots you with its poisonous spines.
Demonic Zombie: This is a zombie that attacs you with the limbs of its foes for incredible amounts of damage. When killed you are poisioned for a duration of time.
LvL3:
Demonic Rangers(only Monster besides the Advocate): These are rangers overcome with the esence of the Advocate himself. The rapid Fire you for incredible amounts of damage bent on the protection of their master.
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Re: The Demonic Fortress
« Reply #1 on: 02/16/03 at 00:54:56 » |
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Anyone like my idea  I think it is good anyone else?
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Re: The Demonic Fortress
« Reply #2 on: 02/16/03 at 04:32:21 » |
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I think the weapon is way way to powerful, defeats the purpose of buyinh the cobalt staff of the winds
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Re: The Demonic Fortress
« Reply #3 on: 02/16/03 at 14:03:32 » |
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Like I said the wepon can be reduced in efectiveness in does not have to stay at what it is at. If the Area is accepted the staff will make the changes to the droped wepon to how they want it to be.
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Re: The Demonic Fortress
« Reply #4 on: 02/16/03 at 18:06:06 » |
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on 02/14/03 at 21:23:52, Thenobleone wrote:| You realize that there are scattered limbs and bones. |
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You have probably heard this already, but here it is again. Try not to use the pronoun "You". Area descriptions are not to dictate user behavior but to describe an area. Try bringing about his realization you speak of by some other means than telling the user.
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Re: The Demonic Fortress
« Reply #5 on: 02/17/03 at 14:14:08 » |
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Ahhh ok I can do that lol. I did have the user in mind. I can make the changes and post the revised version when I have some free time today.
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Re: The Demonic Fortress
« Reply #6 on: 09/20/03 at 02:12:46 » |
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thats what i said to myself the weapon is to cheap but nice detail
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