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Re: Legend of Inari
« on: 05/04/03 at 18:28:41 » |
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I like it! I love that it has a whole background story to the what I'm assuming would be a boss. The waterfall kicking butt rocks.
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #1 on: 05/04/03 at 18:46:31 » |
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nice story 
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #2 on: 05/04/03 at 20:35:06 » |
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Very nicely done, Sera. The /grid 1:'s are a little long, but to each his/her own. I really like all the detail you put into your descriptions you trully are an excellent writer.
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #3 on: 05/06/03 at 16:05:09 » |
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yeah, bring this area!! i wanna get killed by fish fallin from the waterfall!! (kickz azz)
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #4 on: 05/10/03 at 22:05:19 » |
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Nice work Cris.. Your work on this area is only equaled by your personal hygiene!
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #5 on: 05/11/03 at 03:45:54 » |
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It's a great area, and I hope it will be seen in Nightmist.
I don't think we should be able to kill a Waterfall though.
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #6 on: 05/11/03 at 08:58:59 » |
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on 05/04/03 at 20:35:06, Zephie wrote: The /grid 1:'s are a little long
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That isn't heard too often.
Might want to use a's and an's before your /grid 55. Makes it sound better.
Comparison:
--- Pages You from An Open Meadow(--): hi
--- Pages You from Open Meadow(--): hi
Also the /grid 78:Meadowland sounds kinda cheesy.
You don't want to use too many personal references. You are merely describing the atmosphere and environment. Not the player's emotions. That they must reflect on by themselves. But all in all you got your descs down nicely.
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #7 on: 05/11/03 at 23:20:31 » |
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Good suggestion Stotic. ;p
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #8 on: 05/14/03 at 07:02:31 » |
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Ok, rather than Meadowland, how about Grassland?
I agree with putting in A or An where needed in the pages.
Identity, if you don't kill the waterfall...you won't get any farther...besides, if tables and chairs can attack you...then so can a waterfall 
I thank you all for your complients. I have put a lot of hard work into this area. I want it to be a challenge for the "bored lvl 30s".
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #9 on: 05/30/03 at 07:23:28 » |
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Perhaps instead of 'fighting' the waterfalls, you could fight to get through it. So basically it is an attack, that just does not show the damage done, and when it dies, you just manage to push through the torrent of water.
*clicks on waterfall*
You attempt to struggle trough the waterfall.
*clicks on waterfall*
You attempt to struggle trough the waterfall.
Death message for waterfall: You managed to force your way through the waterfall!
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #10 on: 05/30/03 at 08:58:01 » |
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 and i wanted to kill it!!!
nah but your solution deval is kinda good
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #11 on: 05/30/03 at 15:15:23 » |
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I would agree with you Deval, if it didn't directly effect part of my plans...
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #12 on: 06/11/03 at 02:10:29 » |
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Due to a lack of interest shown on this area, I have removed it
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #13 on: 06/11/03 at 05:10:01 » |
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There isnt lack of interest. Just lack of time. We handle one project at a time.
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #14 on: 06/23/03 at 06:37:00 » |
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I knew this area idea would be posted again. I know it will be made, that's if cris doesn't pull out like the young males who think they can avoid getting a lass pregnant by doing such. Then there is something I'd like to know, Cris, who was asking if I was bi, it's driving me crazy. Remember, d**n you remember!
Edit: so changed to such.
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Re: Legend of Inari
« Reply #15 on: 06/23/03 at 09:09:02 » |
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on 06/23/03 at 06:37:00, Temp wrote:| that's if cris doesn't pull out like the young males who think they can avoid getting a lass pregnant by doing such. |
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HAHAHA LMAO
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