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#1 ice_cold

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Posted 22 December 2004 - 07:31 AM

For months earthquakes have trembled Nightmist's grounds and the mountains to the south of it. The elders and shamans of the communities have been baffled as to why they've been occurring; in no record has anything ever been said about months of earthquakes or of great tremors that last for hours on end. As more and more earthquakes passed through the forest and Nightmist, a giant rift in the ground devoured a small portion of Sentent. The newly formed rift stretches beyond the eyes can see, to the other side of the mountains. Within a week of the rifts developement, many adventurers scrounged up enough courage to seek out the wonders of the new lands; warriors and merchants, mages and paladins, even guards and priests chose to explore the rich enviroment. To everyone's amazement, the two-week old rift already had tall trees, wild flowers, and packs of herbivore animals grazing. On either side of the great rift sits large, pale grey, granite mountains that scale thousands of feet up the skyline. Visitors of the rift tell stories of amazingly beautiful sunflowers that stand ten feet tall, packs of elk that aren't afraid of approaching parties, small ponds and streams with water so pure that you can see to the bottom and all the fish swimming, and of a single odd creak that is jet black. Of the people who speak of the creak, a few alarmed adventurers told of when the water was in their hands or in water skins, the water no longer was black, but a light bluish-green color, and when drank, the water not only alleviated their thirst, but healed their wounds as well. Some travelers even told of a mysterious tribal community that worships scorpions and feast on live animals.

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step in
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You are standing on the edge of the rift. Thick vegetation grows overhead, concealing everything beneath the dense canopy from view. There's a group of large trees to the South and the Mountains of Sentent is to the North.

look around
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You are standing on the edge of the rift. You are surrounded by thick trees that create a verdant canopy overhead, blocking out all signs of the skyline. To the South, a small path has been worn through by the travelers who came before you. To the North lie the Mountains of Sentent.

Ice_Cold Pages You from Edge of Rift (Black Creek Rift)

walk in
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You are standing on what seems to be a small trail. Tall trees grow all around you, with the occasional flower disrupting the monotonous greenery. You can go up the ridge by going North, or further down by going *direction(s)*.

look around
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You are standing on a small trail. Though it has formed just recently, the surrounding flora is already beginning to encroach upon the path through the forest. Pine, oak, and elms all make this area their home, along with carnations. You can go North back towards Mountains of Sentent. The trail also goes *direction(s)*.

look around
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You are standing on a small trail. Though it has formed just recently, the surrounding flora are already beginning to encroach upon the path through the forest. Flowers such as daisies, tulips, and dandelions grow at the feet of towering sunflowers which fill out the area surrounding the path. You can go North back towards Sentent Mountains. The trail also goes *direction(s)*.

look around
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You are standing on a small trail. The sparse grass contrasts sharply with the deep foliage behind you, yet it still seems consistent with the overall scenery. You can go North back towards the Sentent Mountains. The trail also goes *direction(s)*.

Ice_Cold Pages You from Dirt Trail (Dark Creek Rift)

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these would be thrown throughout the rift with the walk-in description right above them and the page thats below them. Once again the descriptions are rather large, but I feel that they need to be that long to continually build up the fact that the area is very beautiful and unlike anything the adventurer has ever seen before.
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walk in
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You are standing in a patch of bird-of-paradise flowers. A kaleidoscopic of orange, blue, and green frame the waterfall. You may go East or North.
*

look around
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You are standing in the midst of a patch of bird-of-paradise flowers. A waterfall sings a soothing song as the water is pulled helplessly to the ground into a cool pool at the base of the waterfall. Remarkably clear, you can easily see the bottom of the shallow lake and the abundant fish swimming around. Further beauty lies to the East, or you can go North towards the city Nightmist.
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walk in
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You are standing in a small field. Flowers such as stargazer lilies, orange gerbera daisies, and yellow poms surround you. Though the lush greenery is full of life, there are no animals in the midst of the beauty. You may go North or South.
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look around
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You are standing in a small field filled with a variety of flowers. An abundance of lilies make this field their home, as well as gerbera daisies, poms, and roses. Fragrant flowers are all around, yet no bees revel in the vivid blooms. You can go North or South.
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walk in
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You are standing next to a tainted creek. The creeks shore is completely barren; nothing but ash and dirt cover the ground beneath you. You may return East to the flowers and trees, South along the creek, North towards Nightmist, or you can wade acrossed the creek by going West.

look around
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You are standing on the shore of a dark creek. Sparse, dead trees are the only feature disrupting the barren strip running parallel to the creek. The loose dirt shifts and crumbles beneath the weight of your body, contrasting sharply with the lush greenery mere yards away. To your North are the Mountains if Sentent, a meadow to the East, and the dirty creek is to your West. You can walk along the creek by going South.

Ice_Cold Pages You from Shore (Dark Creek Rift)

walk in
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You are standing in a warm stream of dark water. The current pushes on you as it descends south down a light slope towards dark caves. You may go East or West to the rivers shores or follow the river by going South.

look around
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You are standing

Alux
The Alux is a large four legged beast with long white horns sprouting from it's head. It's large body is covered in long brown fur, and it's hooves have a dark black tint to them. The Alux is in a healthy condition.

Would have around 1,650 hp
Bites for 35 damage
Rams you for 65 damage
1 stamina every round .
Gives 65 exp per point of damage
Drops:
100 gold
Alux Meat 100%


The Water Snake has red, yellow, and purple stripes all along its body. Two long fangs extend from its mouth trying to find a target on your body for it's deadly venom. The Water Snake is in a healthy condition.

Would have around 2,500 hp
Poinson's for 40
Hits for 20 every round
Has 3 stamina a round
Gives 55 exp per point of damage
Drops:
250 gold
Anti-Venom 5%


The Mountain Fox has a long slender body. Foam forms around its lips as it growls at you. The Mountain Fox is in a healthy condition.

Has about 750 hp
Bites for 45 Damage
Has 1 stamina a round
Gives 55 exp per hit.
Drops:
50 gold
Fox Fur 25%


The Flailing Ogre stands at nine feet tall. The Ogre's eyes are a bright red and its mouth is filled with four inch teeth. In its right hand is a blood tainted wooden club that is as large as you. The Flailing Ogre is in a healthy condition.

Would have around 4,200 hp
Hits you with its club for 100 damage
Punches you for 75 damage
Attempted to punch you, but slightly connected for 13 damage (something like that for a 3rd attack)
1 stamina every 5 seconds
Gives 65 exp per point of damage
Drops:
450 gold
Ogre's Elixir 2%


Items:

Alux Meat: The Alux meat is eaten by the Rivara tribe raw., Type of item: Food.

Fox Fur: The foxes fur is greatly sought out by merchants for its durability and softness., Type of item: Doesn't do anything special, or is a key.

Anti-Venom: The thick, light blue liquid has a tremendous healing ability to those who have been poisoned., Type of item: Potion.

Ogre's Elixir: The mysterious brown liquid is rarely seen away from ogres., Type of item: Potion.


The area was okayed by Stotic on old Nightmist forum, but soon after I heard no new areas were going in, after pyramid went in, i decided to work on it again to see if it could be put in.
I read somewhere that ostrichs hide their heads under the sand because moles watch porn.

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#2 the unknown

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Posted 22 December 2004 - 07:36 AM

Cool - I like it

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Posted 22 December 2004 - 08:10 AM

Too much too read LOL! B)


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Posted 22 December 2004 - 09:18 PM

i like it...
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#5 Squee

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Posted 23 December 2004 - 03:43 AM

Amazing descriptions. Superb.

I like how this area isn't designed to drop some uber scroll or armament - it's just one of those great areas to go to.
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#6 ice_cold

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Posted 23 December 2004 - 03:54 AM

like orc caves use to be
I read somewhere that ostrichs hide their heads under the sand because moles watch porn.

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Posted 23 December 2004 - 01:51 PM

Very cool area ^^

I love training places where the monsters drop things, adds a certain level of excitement to killing monsters over and over again lol, and as Squee said, very nice descriptions. I certainly hope this is added. :D
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Posted 23 December 2004 - 05:37 PM

Very nice, but what does Ogres Elixer do? Or shall we wait and find out if it is added?

#9 ice_cold

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Posted 24 December 2004 - 02:42 AM

walk in
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You are standing in a warm stream of dark water. The current pushes on you as it descends south down a light slope towards a dark cave. You may go East or West to the rivers shores or follow the creek by going South.

look around
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You are standing in a warm stream of dark water. Three feet deep, the current pushes slightly on your body as it rushes down a slight slope towards a dark cave. You can wade your way West or East to the shores of the creek or South towards the dark cave.

Ice_Cold Pages You from Creek (Dark Creek Rift)

Walk in
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You are standing on hard compacted dirt. Unlike the oppisite side of the creek, this area is completely barren of all vegitation. You can explore the wasteland by going North, West, or South. A creek is to your East.

look around
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You are standing on hard compacted dirt which through time has been completely dried out from drought. Unlike the eastern side of the creek, this area is completely barren of all vegitation. You can explore the barren plain by going West, Travel along the creek by going North and South, or go East into the dark creek.



The items are just useable 'gems'. deval had an idea to add gems that are sellable to add 'fun' in the area. anyways, thats all im saying
I read somewhere that ostrichs hide their heads under the sand because moles watch porn.

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#10 ice_cold

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Posted 26 April 2009 - 07:11 AM

bump lol

someone showed it to me on nightmist, dont know how they found it, so i decided to bring it back up <3 update some as well

Ruby Butterfly
The Ruby Butterfly has a width spanning numerous feet long. Small green spots speckle it's wings which flutter furiously in attempt to keep the creatures body suspended in the air.

Would have 480 hp
Creates a large gust of wind for 5 points of damage
Attacks you with its wings for 18 points of damage
1 stamina
Gives 35 xp per point of damage
Drops:
No Gold


Alux
The Alux is a large four legged beast with long white horns sprouting from it's head. It's large body is covered in long brown fur, and it's hooves have a dark black tint to them. The Alux is in a healthy condition.

Would have around 1,050 hp
Bites for 35 damage
Rams you for 65 damage
1 stamina every round .
Gives 65 exp per point of damage
Drops:
170 gold
Alux Meat 100%


The Water Snake has red, yellow, and purple stripes all along its body. Two long fangs extend from its mouth trying to find a target on your body for it's deadly venom. The Water Snake is in a healthy condition.

Would have around 300 hp
Poinson's for 40 damage
Hits for 20 every round
Has 3 stamina a round
Gives 60 exp per point of damage
Drops:
150 gold
Anti-Venom 2%


The Mountain Fox has a long slender body. Foam forms around its lips as it growls at you. The Mountain Fox is in a healthy condition.

Has about 750 hp
Bites for 45 Damage
Has 1 stamina a round
Gives 55 exp per hit.
Drops:
50 gold
Fox Fur 25%


The Flailing Ogre stands at nine feet tall. The Ogre's eyes are a bright red and its mouth is filled with four inch teeth. In its right hand is a blood tainted wooden club that is as large as you. The Flailing Ogre is in a healthy condition.

Would have around 3,000 hp
Hits you with its club for 100 damage
Punches you for 75 damage
Attempted to punch you, but slightly connected for 13 damage (something like that for a 3rd attack)
1 stamina
Gives 65 exp per point of damage
Drops:
450 gold
Ogre's Elixir 2%

Edited by ice_cold, 26 April 2009 - 05:27 PM.

I read somewhere that ostrichs hide their heads under the sand because moles watch porn.

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Posted 26 April 2009 - 11:57 PM

i remember this. always thought it was alright XD

but i thought, wtf, it doesnt have an overpowered boss drop whats the point?
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it's plausible that the SOB hasn't spawned


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#12 ice_cold

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Posted 27 April 2009 - 03:10 AM

lol, for training and not to introduce a drop that will be obsolete in a few months. its just an alternative to whats in nightmist
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#13 Raylen

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Posted 27 April 2009 - 10:30 AM

i know

i was doing what we describe in the trade as "just kidding" (in association with self-deprecating humour) :P
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it's plausible that the SOB hasn't spawned


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Posted 28 April 2009 - 02:10 PM

Nice area, and I think the pod of 50-60 is enough to attract people of all levels. So it does provide a new exciting alternative to training

This area intended for 1alt/multi/both?

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Posted 28 April 2009 - 05:49 PM

As the post was created in 2004, i would assume the idea was initially created for main, but now i would assume it would be an area that could be implemented on both servers.

forgot to say, supported :P

Edited by Achilles, 28 April 2009 - 05:49 PM.


#16 ice_cold

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Posted 30 April 2009 - 10:26 AM

actually, it was crated before 2004, look back on the old forum and you'll see it, this was just an updated post as the first post says, this area has already been okayed to be put in by stotic...lol hes gone obviously.
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#17 Raylen

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Posted 30 April 2009 - 11:44 AM

hehe, put in by who?
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it's plausible that the SOB hasn't spawned


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#18 Masta

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Posted 04 May 2009 - 02:04 PM

Keep on hitting this idea ice_cold, It sounds good, plus if the elixirs were at 2% and only obtainable here, plus they had some use in battles / alchemical properties then it has the potential to be a nice area.




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