In one hand he holds an Iron Staff, the other a Wooden Bracers.
This should be changed to the other, Wooden Bracers... Or something similar. The same thing with other plural items. Just a simple improvement. ^^
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Started by Sean, Aug 11 2005 10:30 PM
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Posted 11 August 2005 - 11:41 PM
ty, just /bug any lines you see that are not grammatically correct and i'll fix them.
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Posted 11 August 2005 - 11:55 PM
Wouldn't one Wooden Bracer go on each arm?
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Posted 12 August 2005 - 12:34 AM
"In one hand he holds an Iron Staff, the other a Wooden Bracers." would need to become "In one hand he holds an iron staff, and wears wooden bracers upon his forearms." or such n' such.
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Posted 12 August 2005 - 06:40 PM
your so smart! lol"In one hand he holds an Iron Staff, the other a Wooden Bracers." would need to become "In one hand he holds an iron staff, and wears wooden bracers upon his forearms." or such n' such.
And he had in his right hand seven stars: and out of his mouth went a sharp twoedged sword: and his countenance was as the sun shineth in his strength.
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Posted 30 August 2005 - 08:48 AM
or "A PAIR OF WOODEN BRACERS"?
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