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Lich, I was reading up on what you sent me... It's actually not bad.

I'm going to come right out and say that I hate fan-fics (which will probably make me a hypocrit at some later date) but what you've written seems very nice. Some parts are confusing because of poor grammar but I know that you'll have someone go over it with a fine-toothed comb at some later date.

Anyways, very nice job. I'll be sure to finish it later when I get home.

[Eternyte]

The world of Nightmist is a dark and dangerous place
and it just got worse. Pandilex the god of the dead and Necromancer's has unleashed a plot to take over the world and rule the plain of the gods. Many have tried to stop him and many more will. but in the end it will take five friends or will it. Read this work by an unknown artist and enjoy a world and a time all but forgotten.

Wow, sounds totally unique. Perhaps Pandilex could change his name to Sauron. Maybe the friends could be called Frodo, Sam, Pippin, Merry. Then they could make friends with a wizard, Gandalf sounds good, also a Human, a Dwarf and an Elf. I always liked the names Aragorn, Gimley and Legolas.

I think you're on to a winner here, maybe they could make a movie or three about the books.


I like the concept of a book about Nightmist, but couldn't you change the plot just a touch. Maybe give a little background about the beginning of Nightmist, and the setting mists and the wars between Ewin and Norinth. Just use the storyline from the game. I might even buy a copy then.

[Angelus]

I like the concept of a book about Nightmist, but couldn't you change the plot just a touch. Maybe give a little background about the beginning of Nightmist, and the setting mists and the wars between Ewin and Norinth. Just use the storyline from the game. I might even buy a copy then.

Who says the book doesn't have those things. Did you read it? No. Besides, there were already books about people taking over the world before your prescious LotR. If you wanne bring in some sarcasm it would be good not to make yourself look like a dumb moose in the progress..

Edited by Angelus, 27 August 2004 - 04:54 PM.

[Lich]

thank you angelus, and one other flaw, the people in lotr actually completed what they set ot to do. it wasnt realistic at all, and they were made out to be super ummmmm human for lack of a better word.

No where in Lotr do you even once see a single god, hear anything about them. In this book you see the gods and how they interact with us all the time. As for the starting story of Nightmist it used in the book alot the coming of the mist was fortold, if you even read what i put up as taste chapters you would see that. I have never even read LOTR i have only seen the movie's but it wasnt for a lack of trying it was simply because i have seen the pmcs manuals for tanks that were less boring. That being said on to pandi.


Simon it was nothing personal against you making you the bad guy but it was actually something you were doing at the time of me starting it that decided you were perfect for the part.

I know your name is from another book and its not a problem i checked the copy right laws dont cover names as long as i have changed the way the caracter is, I know it is from another book as i knew i had seen it before, but i dont know the name of the book so you would have to tell me is he an evill dictator type god in it.

You were in your tower and screaming through a system message. You are all my minons and i will rule you all. that took form in my over active immagination and i decided to let you try to do it.
but if have you have read any of it did you like what you saw so far, and if not you will see that i also set up for a second to it that you arent as bad as i paint you ...


Newb Cyric was the god of the dead untill he was over thrown by pandilex read the taste chapters...lol..

Edited by Lich, 27 August 2004 - 08:19 PM.

[Kreaper]

WOW dude awesome im DEFINETLY buying a copy BRAVO!!

[Lich]

still waiting on a reply from a few people even if its in a private page or memo... i dont care...smiles.. there will also be a few more as i have added a few things today and a few other crits t mentioned in the final.