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Halor
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The Gates of ??? - Player Area
« on: 03/08/03 at 01:24:18 » |
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The Gates of Whatever, Player idea from Issyfur? on aim. Looks ok so far, maps looks good and descriptions are ok. I have not talked with the person for a bit, any updates?
/grid 55:The Gates of Whatever /grid 78:The Gates of Whatever /grid 3:1
/grid 1:The ground under your feet is solid brimstone. There are a few loose pebbles here and there. There is a bizarre smell coming from the horizon.
/grid 2:You look around and see nothing but bare land. No plants anywhere to be seen, just a small and simple path leading you to your destination. You look down and see footprints. You’ve never seen footprints quite like these ones, and you are almost afraid of what kind of creature makes them.
/grid 55:Path to Gates /grid 78:The Gates of Whatever /grid 3:1
/grid 1:As you proceed further through this awkward place, the sky gets a darker look to it. As you walk further and further, the ground more loosely pebbles, as if no one or nothing walks here anymore. You hear weird noises, and are afraid of what creature makes these noises.
/grid 2:Beside you a small stream infested with sulfuric acid. It has a hideous smell of rotten eggs. It’s not the same smell you smelled back where you started. The dirt and stones on the path is not as packed down as the path was before. Its like no one, or nothing walks on this part of the path to keep it packed down.
/grid 55:Guard Room /grid 78:Desecrated Sanctuary /grid 3:1
/grid 1:You have entered a large room. There are bats hanging off the walls, and spiders all over the floor. All around this room is dead bodies, along with armor scattered around the room. There is a awkward tapping coming from the other side of the wall.
/grid 2:The only room you have been in so far that everything is intact. There is a ceiling, and the walls, still crumbling, are together, and not as unstable as the ones prior to this room. A bat swoops down from the ceiling. It appears to you that, there are dead skeletons all over the place. Suits of Armor, very shiny and very clean are placed all around this room. You look over and see this small appearance of light. You hear a vague sound. You follow the sound and light.
Looks good so far. Map is great.
I edited some of the descriptions to fit the area better, but overall they are good. Like I said, any updates?
Note to Issyfur: The name is going to need changing, for one the forum even blocked it out. Think of a new name or something.
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Issyfur
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I love YaBB 1G - SP1!
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Re: The Gates of ??? - Player Area
« Reply #1 on: 03/08/03 at 18:36:41 » |
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Hey, that looks like my idea! I'll talk to you on AIM Halor.
Unfortunetly, due to circumstances beyond my control, my laptop's onboard synaptics mouse bugged out. Wouldn't work and i had to send it to the company for them to repair. While the computer was in the 'shop' the company reformatted my hard drive, or gave me a new one,not sure. But i lost the written idea i had for this. Once i receive the area idea again from Halor, i'll continue to work on it and finish it.
After thinking about a new name for the idea, and talking to a couple friends. I've deicided to change the name to "The Gates of Montola" (thanks  )
I'll give an update as soon as i recieve the written word doc idea.
Issyfur
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Re: The Gates of ??? - Player Area
« Reply #2 on: 03/08/03 at 20:27:45 » |
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I see a lot of you did this, you see that. Try to keep those to as minimal as possible for that you are merely describing the room and/or atmosphere. Not the character's emotions and reactions to certain things.
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We'll douse ourselves in gasoline and hang our bodies from the lampposts.
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Re: The Gates of ??? - Player Area
« Reply #3 on: 03/09/03 at 10:37:49 » |
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i dont think ive ever hear you give someone a complement Stotic...
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Re: The Gates of ??? - Player Area
« Reply #4 on: 03/09/03 at 15:52:53 » |
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Well that really doesn't matter seeing as it isn't his job to complement, its to help nightmist become a better game, and most of his comments aren't negative, just pointing out some things they may need to change. So just leave him alone 
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Re: The Gates of ??? - Player Area
« Reply #5 on: 03/09/03 at 23:31:46 » |
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What I brought up was an issue I wanted the entire player map developing community to know of.
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We'll douse ourselves in gasoline and hang our bodies from the lampposts.
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